KissKissStudio I'm afraid the saving menu is extremely inconvenient and frustrating to use. It doesn't show the page numbers, so you have to click on the arrows to move one page up or down.
Also, it obviously doesn't allow you to name the pages at the top as you can in any Renpy game, which makes it very difficult to keep track of what route is in that page.
And finally, it's only limited to 9 pages! That might seem a lot for a game with only 2 clear routes and minimal branching, but many players like to save their game at every turn so that they don't have to struggle to find certain scenes when they want to read them again.
And now a more personal opinion: the main menu music is cool, but it doesn't fit the dark tone of this game at all. It would be better suited for a college game or something like that. And actually, I'm quite sure that I've heard it in a different game not long ago, but I can't put my finger on it right now; I will remember when I play that other game again.
This game needs a dark music theme, like the one it used to have, but better.
Apart from all these suggestions, the rest of the remaster looks great. The UI is fantastic, and it shows how much you have improved over the years. I'm sure this will sell like hot cakes on Steam. Good luck!
